Jamahara
come here will you?
tell me what you’ve seen yesterday…
me, I had a
glass of water
full of planes
and jellymen swimmin
g round
sin
gin
g an
grily
the name of some
god
I for
got which one
it was
I sent a miniature eel
to stran
gle them
::: ::: :::
come here will you?
tell me what you’ve seen yesterday…
me, I had a
glass of water
full of planes
and jellymen swimmin
g round
sin
gin
g an
grily
the name of some
god
I for
got which one
it was
I sent a miniature eel
to stran
gle them
::: ::: :::
[Picture: Ténèbres by reading_is_dangerous]
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ReplyDelete1.pangea said...
Sounds like my kind of ending :)
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Je suis arivee , je suis ici...
Je n'aurais jaimais du te laisser grelotter dans ce froid aussi longtemps...
January 12, 2007 7:54 PM
2. Anonymous said...
jellymen singing angrily about any god would be hard to take. Especially in your water. (Are you sure it was water?)
de
January 15, 2007 4:33 AM
dear R_I_D:
ReplyDeleteASTOUNDING image of an amorphous glow that, upon closer examination, will reveal that they are actually two bodies (glowing with aura, vibrating to the speed of light or beyond), joined at the posterior end...
Your poem is so tiny yet so strong
Just like the miniature eel you sent; Its size belies its potency to "strangle" those that "pollute" the water in the glass (the pesky planes, jellymen...)
The poem also takes the form of a man with a hat, with a beard, with (two pairs of) hands and has a piece of rifle (a magical one) protruding from his pockets.
This is a MASTERPIECE!
(No one can do this so well except you. Superb!)
Thank you for giving us an intimation of your extraordinary insight.
~EeL